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看了一些资料后，初次写，有没有6的样子？刚才把大作文也录入了，请大家再给提提意见，怎么来改进!词汇应该是我的弱项!
这个是要求写一个正式的complaint信件向房东。
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing concerning about the accommodation problem I meet recently.I am Bluer Wang from China.
I move into the house at 34 Hill Road with my family recently which I rented from you two weeks ago.
After I move in,I found some problems with some of the furnitures which already cause a lot of inconvenience to us.
Frist,I found the light in the kitchen is not working.I suppose we need a new one to replace.Second,I found the
washing matchine is not performing very well always.Sometime,it stops running when I am washing clothing with it.
Then,I have to make power reset to recover.In rare situation,it makes terrible noise which already scared my son.
Last but not least,I found the TV is not working perfectly.There is always snow noise in it which distrube our enjoy
with good quality.
I hope you could come to my house and have a thorough check with the funitures.After checking,please deal with the problematic ones either with fixing or replacing.It will be graceful if you could write back to me.
Sincerely yours
Bluer Wang
这个题目是，using a computer everyday can have more negative than positvie effects on young children.Do you agree or disagree?有些套用9分写作的模版.
These days, computer are playing increasingly important roles in every parts of our worlds. It presents every where in our daily activities ,for instance, in supermarket, office, restaurant, home ,etc. This raise certain questions about the usage of computers. Although there are valid arguments to the contrary, in this paper I will argue that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages for young children to use computer every day. The reasons for this are twofold.
Firstly, it is not essential or must for young children to use computer daily. Using computer daily for young children means mostly playing computer games with it. What can benefit them from this perception? I suggest to avoid using computer too much for young children since it is the time they should focus on more social activities and assignments/practice which mostly comes from teachers.
Further and more importantly, though, overusing computer for young children will cause damage to their eyesight and postures, which brings much inconvenience when they grow up, e.g ,having to wear a pair of glasses which means losing opportunities to pursuer vocations-pilots which require certain excellent eyesight, suffering from neck/back ache , and so on. It also increases the tendency for them to be isolated with real society, to live in the virtual world which computer creates. Spending two much time on computers rather than communicating with other young children causes obstacles from them to develop interpersonal skills which is highly desired by most employers.
By way of conclusion, I believe that this issue is likely to become more common in near future as computers are more affordable by many of families. It ,therefore, demands our further consideration.
[ 本帖最后由 alwaysbluer 于 11-9-2009 19:27 编辑 ] |
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